Sara

Posted by Sarah (Gainesville, United States) on 22 March 2009 in People & Portrait.

The next series is a few of the photos I took of a friend at a local park. All comments/critiques are appreciated!!

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Comments (4)

DenisSm from Prague, Czech Republic

nice warm light for your friend...personally i would use a little bit more sharpness in her eyes...but it is my personal taste :-)

22 Mar 2009 2:10pm

@DenisSm: I agree -- the photo is a little soft overall I think. Thanks for your comment!

Ti from Alpharetta, United States

Nice to see another gator!

Sweet girl with a sweet smile! Morningside was our favorite place while we were there from '86 to '92...

22 Mar 2009 4:08pm

@Ti: thank you! I'll have to check out Morningside -- this was at Kanapaha.

Walter from Watkinsville, United States

this is a very nice photo of your friend. I am hoping the original was less grainy than what you posted here. I like the focal point of the face while keeping a shallow depth of field creating more emphasis on the face.

23 Mar 2009 12:31am

@Walter: Thanks Walter. The original is less grainy -- I think my post-processing is probably what affected that. I need to go back to the original and try again, hopefully with less grainy-ness! I appreciate your comments very much!

Anthony Thomason from Phoenix, United States

Very nice. Watch your exposure. These images of your friend seem a bit grainy and distract from her beauty and you god choice of location.
-Peace

23 Mar 2009 8:33pm

@Anthony Thomason: Thank you for your suggestion, Anthony. I think the graininess may have been part of my post-processing. These are some of the first photos I've taken in RAW and then adjusted, and I think I may have gone a little far on some of them. Thank you!!

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